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A thunderous crash and the brightest lightening flash,
Chemicals of all the colors of the rainbow and every  shade of night,
Bubbling and frothing, dribbling and dripping,
Tubes and coils, metals and plastics,
They curled into my flesh and up my nose and down my throat,
I wasn't yet among the living, but I also wasn't dead,
This is how my life began,

Created, my life was created,
That doesn't mean I can not think,
Nor does it mean I can not feel,
Raw emotion?
Love, Hate, Joy, Jealousy,
I know these feelings and I know them well,

I am every part as man and beast as you are,
Maybe twice as so,
But I am not a monster, murderer, nor am I evil,
I wont ever be,
Can you not find it in your human hearts to give me a chance?
I know for a fact this isn't very good. I got about half-way through and got bored, but I halfheartedly finished it anyway and for that reason I'm uploading it; if I didn't it would mean any effort put in was wasted. So comment whatever the hell you want, so long as it is honest ^_^
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insomniaplague's avatar
Psh, don't be like that--you didn't do a half bad job on this. :) The imagery was very nice, although the form and flow wasn't too horribly compelling. But hey, that line "I am every part as man and beast as you are/Maybe twice as so" made up for it in the upmost. :meow: